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poop

if you took time to draw an awesomely detailed stool and animatied maybe two flys around with a little crap ambience you would have good quality work compared to the 15.76 seconds of live i just wasted watching this. But it did make me realize how much i hate you, and this animation, and to fuel me with such rage shows some effort.. so 3/10... but 0/5 where it counts. but all in all, i cant even call it crap for that would be a straight compliment to the animation, and this.... does not deserve in any way any kind of compliment even if someone force fed their appendages into my mouth pointed a gun at my head and said "compliment it or i will shoot both of them" i would not do it, in fact i would pull the trigger myself and hope the dude got off later, because that was a complete waste of time.

:P

hmmm.

it should have definitly been longer.. there is someone down the review list that sad it needs to be at least 2 minutes long... dont listen to that crap... there are plenty of shorts that make it.. in fact, if you review the newgrounds history, only recently have there been an excess of >30 sec movies, so yeah, short can be good... but just a tad too short to get the real point.. but practice is good ... keep it up.

MRJudorules responds:

Thanks!

you said it.. not me

i believe the entire movie was worth watching because there is one incredaciously accurate/true statement at the end of the movie...

"Oh no! A Second Part? I cant a handle a Second Part!..."

A Movie that truthful deserves to be watched.

alright.

Your paragraph above, had a better story line than that of your animation. The idea, is just completely awesome, that is really the reason i gave it a 2, to encourage you to animate with your same creativeness, but with better style. voice acting was alright, and some of your jokes were great, eybrow raise took a little tho. maybe cut that sequence in half. work a little harder next time, turn a couple of days into weeks of work, and you should have good quality, its not about how fast you finish. but all in all. it was ok. needs work, but ok.

LordArashi888 responds:

I see what you're saying. Thanks for your review. I'll take that into account on future projects.

error

matters is spelled m-a-t-t-e-r-s... just so you know.. kick ass end credit song.

sweet action

the sound effects a little loud. but you have like an awesome voice for this kinda stuff...

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Aw come on dude a 3? Thanks for the voice compliment I guess...

wow

there was just too much of nothing, no real animation, no real sound, no real story, and no real action. that whole dialouge scene,... maybe you should rethink that considering you dont have voices or sound during that, the fight animation in the second part is alright, the first part, way too much bad slow motion, i jus thought it was bad animating at first. but yeah.. i dont think this one is gonna last, and if it does, you have too many friends on this site.

Pinoyguy75 responds:

Yea thanks for the support, its always nice to have fans. Thanks for the criticism though (not sarcastic), but worse stuff has made it, believe me. Yeah, so lets see what stuff you come out with.

Where to start...

I would say that until you get this looking better.. you should not continue the series.. there i said it nicely.. also.. you should seriously think about actually :animating: the characters, not just constantly tweening of morphing everything.. and it would be great if the action sped up, the storyline revised, the characters were more interesting, the music was better fit, and charactes had moving mouths, or just voices even. just use a handful of these, and animate then remake this one.. then go from there... sorry, but i doubt this will make it through

odd

it had some very dry humor... but there was at least humor.. and the ending? the moaning and such... that could have been left out... yeah.

wow

i couldnt understand the audio.. and it just reaches the end and keeps looping.. or was this an error? anyways... seemed a little more disorientating than "trippy" made me sorta wanna throw up a little. and the mushroom.... wtf..

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